RSS

Flash Fiction Challenge: Song Shuffle Stories

06 Jan

Every Friday, Chuck Wendig issues a flash fiction challenge on his blog Terribleminds. This weeks challenge is Song Shuffle Stories. I posted my entry on my LJ blog, but I thought you might want to see it too.

(My song for the challenge is “I Will Follow You Into The Dark” by Death Cab For Cutie.)

This had to be a dream. The deep purple color of the sky, the way the trees swayed without the barest whisper of a breeze, the crunch beneath my feet as I walked along the deserted lane: they had to be a figment of my imagination. Some sick, twisted message from my psyche that I really was as crazy as they told me.

“You’re not crazy,” the surrounding gloom told me, and I was comforted.

“Where am I?” I spoke to no one in particular and continued my trek down the endless road.

“You know where you are.” And instantly I did, though I had never been here, not really, not in my waking life. But I knew this place like I knew my own home.

A cardinal stared at me from his perch on a boulder. His bright red plumage was the color of drying blood in the indigo light.

“That sounds like a bad poem.” He shook his head at me. I’m sure he would have tsk, tsk’d at me if he had teeth.

“Okay.” I stopped in the road and faced him. “His brilliant color was shrouded by the light of dusk.”

“Brilliant? Shrouded? Dusk? Say what you mean, child,” he said with a disgusted grunt and took to the sky. He circled my head twice before moving off toward the horizon.

“You flew off!” I yelled after him with a satisfied smile on my face.

“Better,” said the darkness.

I walked on and watched the last tendrils of the sun’s rays fade below the horizon.

“No.”

I walked on, and the sun set before me.

“Better.”

“What am I doing here?”

“Learning, hopefully. Getting exercise, perhaps. Don’t you like walking at night?”

“No,” I said. A shiver snaked down my spine and the hair on the back of my neck stood up.

“Are you frightened?”

“Yes.”

“Good.”

The world went black around me. I was standing on nothing in the middle of an impenetrable darkness. Noises came at me from all sides: a soft swooshing to my right, a far-off screech behind me, a crunch somewhere to my left. In my terror they sounded like so many beasts ready to devour me. I clapped my hands over my ears and closed my eyes tight.

“Look,” the voice barked. “Look at the things you fear.”

I opened my eyes to a bright room, my kitchen, with its little white stove and calico curtains fluttering in the morning breeze that came through the open window.

“Try again.”

I opened my eyes. I was standing in my kitchen. The morning sun was streaming through the window.

“Better.”

“Why was I so afraid?”

The voice didn’t answer me.

 

About Merry Mahaffey

I am a writer, a mother, and a sci-fi enthusiast. I am currently addicted to Doctor Who, Mumford & Sons, Terry Moore comics, Neil Gaiman, Strike Back on Cinemax, Adele, the Stephanie Plum series by Janet Evanovich, the new Thundercats animated series, and Pinterest.com. My next book will have nothing to do with fairies or ice cream, but may contain mushrooms and argyle socks.
1 Comment

Posted by on January 6, 2012 in Daily

 

Tags:

One Response to Flash Fiction Challenge: Song Shuffle Stories

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s

 
Follow

Get every new post delivered to your Inbox.